Enlisted a critique of my artist friends....

Since we didn't have class this week- I have been asking my artists friends and husband for feedback. They all voted this background. I know the layout cut Dad apart, but I kept his face on one side and I am really set on an offset family rather than centered. Also this illustration took me the longest (about 60 hours) so I don't want to resize to make smaller, here's what I got. Email me feedback if you have time. <3